nice poem! and i think juding by the rest of your poems and the rewiew you gave me that you are in love. good luck!

Thanks for reviewing me! This poem was awesome. Sorry I just picked the shortest thing on your list, I don't have like any time on the computer right now. This was an awesome poem though! I love the way you worded things, I hope I can come back on here soon and read some more

another well written poem keep posting ! swirlygirl AKA thaiswirl

Cool! I often feel like this when my brother me asks to remember something and I just can't do it.

Interesting thought in the final lines.

omg thats awesome!! it sorta flowed like a song. cant you imagine like, i dunno, that guy from googoo dolls singing this as a stanza with the acoustic guitar??

Well, i can.

Goo job!

I can relate to this. Awesome job! Thanks for your review...