Hey Becca, this is great! But i would not give any notion to the reader what the prophecy is yet. Have him explain it to her without telling the reader. That way we just have to go on what the preist said. I also liked- "So i un-damn you!" I thought that it was very clever. Great job.

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Cool! Write more soon! Keep up the good work!

Cool. I can't wait to see what you write next!