   zagato 2004-04-20 . chapter 8cool story. |
 G.Z. DeMuertes 2003-11-15 . chapter 8hey
I meant to read some of your work a long time ago, after you gave me the review. but I couldnt even find the time to write my own stories, well I finally got around to it and im glad i read this story, im goin to read alot more of your stuff cause its just awesome, your writeing style, they way you express detail and emotion. its all awesome. cant wait to read some more of your stuff
L8ter
Jake Adams |
 Lavender Megumi 2003-08-10 . chapter 8Hehehe...not a princess? Doesn't she like the dainty pink dresses?!?! J/k ^^ Pretty good...but cliche with the whole he die and then she know she love hime...but other then that its good! More please ^^ |
 La-Marquise-de-Condorcet 2003-07-10 . chapter 7You're right, you did completely switch from comedy to tragedy. It was very unexpected. Maybe you might want to add a little foreshadowing so your reader is not caught so off guard. I did like the action you showed though. Aerie's cool. |
 Suki Rai 2003-06-30 . chapter 8Ah! I can't believe she killed him! I can't believe she killed him! I liked it but I can't believe she killed him!*moment of silence* Ok. I'm over it. Great story! Keep up the good work! |
 RubberDuk-e 2003-06-19 . chapter 8Sad, but good curve ball. Is this really the end of your story? I am personally a fan of happy endings, but this story sounds more along the lines of "Romeo and Juliet." |
 Chibi Ohkami 2003-06-16 . chapter 7hey this is really good, but why did u have to make him die? *tear* Well, I like it and well, Update soon! |
 Amadria Smith 2003-06-02 . chapter 6MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
I wont give a reveiw until you give me more! Ah! |
| Suki Rai 2003-05-07 . chapter 6 Well...? What happens! I dispise cliff hangers! I want to know if the guy wins! Write more now! Please! |
| RubberDuk-e 2003-05-05 . chapter 6 It sounds if you have already set up Hayden to win the competition. Try throwing in a curve ball. ;) This story sounds as if it happened a good number of years ago and I doubt the princess would be cussing even if she was independant. I'm eagerly awaiting your description of the match. I love fights! |
 Eric Cheung 2003-04-25 . chapter 6Nice,lots of action,peppy,i like it! |
 belle beauty 2003-04-23 . chapter 6Argh! I hate cliffhangers! Write the next chappy now! Pleasee! |
 Silver Sun Rise 2003-04-20 . chapter 5That was REALLY good. I liked how you added the twist about the way she dressed and the way she acts. But as you can tell...i'm good at reading stories and reviewing but not writing...oh well. ^^;; Keep WRITING the next chapter and GET IT OUT! |
 vintagepostcard 2003-04-17 . chapter 5Awesome! Girl Power! I love this story! |
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