OH MY GOD! That was scary. WOW! You write alot of stuff about Brasil. I suppose you have been there. I've never been to Rio, but that town sounded about around Brasil standards. I was even surprised that there were fridges in the rooms. I think you are writing a great story. I also know a chupacabra story. My aunt tells it to me around the fugueira when we go to her farm in Brasil.

Scary story! But I love it anyways! ^^ I heard stories about things like that from some of my hispanic friends, except they only eat farm animals, not humans... but that doesn't matter! GOOD STORY!
Michie-chan

Dude! I totally saw this on Unsolved Mysteries! It's awesome you're writing about it!

The question: "Do you LOVE it?"

The answer: "I LOVE it!!"

That was scary! your story sounds alot like resident evil!! thats really kool. i dont think i will ever go to sleep! you should add to the story. that would be kool, like what happens to the things or something idk. it was really good! :) keep writing

I'm with you, buddy! Heck, this was scary. I'll never read this thing again! I believe! I BELIEVE!! OH, GOD, WHY DO I BELIEVE?? I'm not gonna sleep tonight...if there is a tonight...(looks upon street scared)...(trembles).

Omg! That's scary...and pretty grim. I liked the descriptiveness and the storyline was good in the beggining but I'm not into sad endings =(