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NeoDragonZero 2005-12-07 . chapter 1
I quite enjoyed this poem as well, as I see the other 4 reviewers did in turn. Just what you state in every line is something the world doesn't always necessarily understand: A differece of perspective makes all the difference. What looks dark or non-sociably inept to one, might be done for an unspecified reason to pull off a similar result, just not as derogatorially spoken as the world fronts. Just as the saying goes, 'There are two sides to every coin', and always two sides to every reason for doing something. It all matter on if the eyes are open to seeing the differences, however minute at times, and the ears open to the reasoning behind it all.

Excellent poem with a very powerful message indeed *smiles* Congrats, and please post more.
BecomingMyself 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Short and simple, but meaning very strongly coming across: powerful poem!

Very well written!

Keep them coming!
Scott St. Hilaire 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Very good. I'm really glad I read something like that, I was just thinking about writing something similar. I'm actually very happy that the person who struck the idea b4 me is good at writing :) Good show! Keep it up!
Advent Delirium 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Nice. I know the feeling of conflict (doesn't everyone)? You could get even better if you write more, or maybe you already are a great writer. Kudos!
PlayMateMisfit 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
sadening, but pretty cool all the same :) it's devilish too -lol-
~misfit
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