well done this poem was great a real winner i could sell it on ebay 4 u

i can totally relate to this poem. i love it. i like the ryming too. you're really good. i actually considered writing a poem with the same message about a month ago, because i've been going through the same stuff. (i'm a witch too. for about two years now.) Anyways, i added this to my favorites, and i added you to my favorite authors list. please r/r my stuff
-judi

Why, I think that was wonderful. Honestly. Most of my poems are also spur of of the moment things, and complete craziness at that, but you have a reason for writing this, and it's entirely justified. Congradulations on not only a great poem, but for being your own person. It's great there are people in this world that are TRUELY individuals. I applaud you.
*applause*
All the best,
~*:*~The Dragons Tempest~*:*~
PS-Thank you so much for the review on my poem, it was my first try, and coming from such a great individual, it means ALOT. So thank you. :)

i totally love this! i am a witch too, and it ** me off when people judge me before they know me. thankyou so much!

That is really cool. I'm not a witch but I know someone who is and they are really nice. I am real c*ap at poetry but you obviously aren't!

Good poem. Witches are people too!

It's not the best poem I've ever read, in terms of technical kudos, but... I think it was kinda cute, and I like the subject matter. Keep writing, you'll eventually get better! :smiles:

I liked it ^_^

Well, I liked it! Good poem, I think it got it's point across.

I realy liked this poem especially because it is true. people do say that my sister is just going through a phase but they dont tell me that because I dont talk about it much even though I do think that they should treat us like people.

Nice poem, just wish sum people would understand that at my school!! Xactly what i feel like sumtimes.

The sentiment of this poem just thrills me, and I'll personally take on anyone who attacks you for the topic.

As for the poem itself, it was mostly very good -- my biggest criticism is that it seemed like you were sacrificing meaning for rhyme in some places. A poem doesn't have to rhyme to be good -- in fact, most modern poetry doesn't! Just something to keep in mind. :)

it was really good!

i liked that.

i wouldnt dream of flaming u coz of the subject, and whoever would is an absolute d*head.

very good poem too. most ppl who r good poets cant rhyme words, and u can rhyme AND ur a good poet too! yay! go you!

lotsa luv
jazzo