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greenfroggies 2003-05-22 . chapter 1
I'm sorry about your grandad.
I know that rhyme too - I loved your other poem, please write some more.
Psycho-kyugurl 2003-04-24 . chapter 1
I like it!
Chocolate Chicken 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
I know a little bit more,

The blind man came to see fair play,
The dumb man came to shout hooray!

^^; I've always loved it.
Elethril 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
Oh this is farntashtik. I'm going to memorize it. and say it to people. constantly.
meghan 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
this is indeed a cute poem but there is more to it-

the deaf policeman heard the noise

he turned around and shot the two dead boys

if you don't believe this tale is true

ask the blind man-he saw it too!
Aureya of Chocolate 2003-04-17 . chapter 1
lol

i really liked that poem, so cute!

im sorry about ur grandad, anyone who says poems like that must be really cool

lotsa luv
jazzo
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