Wow...so cute..i hope mr. fake-knee gave u an A on that one!! lol...i really liked it cuz it applies to so much more than just some story that Shakspeare wrote. brav-O!

~~Xandy~~

I like this one even better then the first. It seems to flow really well. Good job!

~wow~ love is a great thing

You can even see Juliet on her balcony calling down to Romeo. Very nice.

Keep writing

~ Ezz

Nice :), I love poems that rhyme and sound well :D. Ohh, Took! Gotta love that Pippin x)!