Awawawaw.Sorry.Just HAD to do that.But...you stopped it!I was just getting excited over it and...it stopped!No!Sorry.*blushes*

burn in hell, you bloody sodding wench...!

you can't leave it off there! man, now i'm about to scream! that's the perfect cliffhanger, just so you know. Gah...So? What is it? I figured that he had murdered his own family, so that came as no surprise, but why is Maxwell going inside the house? I'm assuming that he has something to do with the whole time overlapping thing...it wouldn't surprise me. Hehe, i'm very sorry to hear that you forgot where you were going with the story. I hate it when that happens... But as it si, you have a ton to go off of now, so it hsouldn't be a problem. I gotta go, but please, i'm begging you, update soon!

Hehe, you have, what, 5 new reviews? well, from me at least. I'm off to see what else you write, or read (i lvoe favs lists), so ciao!

umm...you made a mistake. i remembered from the first chapter, Millie had blue eyes and blonde hair too. Maybe I should go back and check...

but what's going on? What time period is he from? and why were they shooting him? I'm guessing revenge over the death of that person he killed in the cottage...I think i need to stop thinking about the story nad just read it, let it all reveal itself. Even if it does destroy half the fun of reading a good mystery...bye!

...i was wrong...it just gets more and more confusing and yet interesting at the same time. hehe, i loved her random outburst. I'm surprised she recognized him that fast. I just wanna read more, cya!

gah! this story is just too good! how did you come up with the idea for it? and how does it all tie into place? I think that we're starting to understand...but you really know how to write a good cliffie! ok, so not really. Your cliffies are actually rather bearable, as they're not supposed to be. But hey! Why am I critisizing? off to the next chapter...

abow...that was really really good! hehe. But, there's one thing i don't get. One thign she crashed into him, and the next he's gone and with Britney...somewhere. I guess we'll find out? It's just...very curious. But either way, it was an awesome start. I'm off to read the next chapter. Cya!

Oh my gosh, I love your story and I can't wait to find out about what happens next.

Please update soon.

What will happen to Millie and the ohters? And what will happen to Mr. Demetre?

Please post soon.

Heeniebabie

I like this so far, esp. the switching between Millie's life and Demetre's. Can't wait to see what happens next!

this is a pretty good story, i wish that you would finish it please. great work!

no! they can't die! the story's just beginning! this is awsome though, even if the cliffhanger seriously sucks! I hope we'll learn more about demetre and this whole time overlapping thing. update asap please! :)
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this is an awsome story you have here! i love britney, she's so cute and sweet! well, on to the next chapter! :)
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i love this chapter! i love this fic! so far the summary is wonderful...i'll finish reading it later or tomorrow i promise...great job

wow i'm confused heh. o.O but i think that's more to my high-octane state of mind right now than to your story. heh but kudos this is really good =)
~k8

oops i think i've read this before ... but when you only had like one chapter. or maybe ... wait i don't know, heh. but whatever reading it now!! love the summary it really just catches my eye (twice now i suppose? *puzzled frown*). so yeah this is a good start all the POV changes are a little confusing but it's all good i'm reading on now
~k8

Are they really dead? omg! it is a really good story...and interesting! update quick