so simple, yet so beatiful...i'm sorry...im losing one of my friends right now...::sniff:: your story looks neat, but i have a final to do that i don't even know how to start..woohoo! procrastination demons! so i don't have much time...

Don't feel hated. Who you are is who you are. I hope you don't feel hated anymore. Not as the real you. Remember that there ARE people who loves you for you. ^-^

Honestly, you know your going to have to write a poem called "I Feel Loved" now or somthing...it's really good though.
~Microphone~

great song
i still love you :)

great song, i think everyone can kinda relate to wanting to be themselves a little more... to be honest, even without your summary, you can pretty much tell thats it's based on a conversation, it's got that kinda 'aftermath' feel

just one lil thing, and this might just be me, but;

"Listen to reason, can't you see I've changed.

Different seasons, get it I'm winter now, not spring."

seems to read a lil jerky, like the second line is a tiny bit too long or something. other than that, great, i'll be sure to keep an eye out for more of your songs.

O I like it! Love the emotion you out into I especially love the chorus though

good job! i really relate. i loved the second verse, "Listen to reason, you're saying you want back the real me Haven't you realized, this is me, you told me to be free are you asking for the false side of me?" you could make the first verse ryhme more, but besides that its awesome!