Hey. That's a really great, unique poem. I really agree with what you are expressing in it and I wish I could write that well.

Hm... I see are you having trouble in your relationship ^_^ with certain loved one. Cause it seems like you are. Well if you can't meet that person's expectations then why go further. Be only trapped like a rabbit but be like a shrew and bite your way out = P heheheheheh It's a great poem Don't pay too much heed to my review because i'm on a sugar high. Also what would make this poem outstanding is violance!