I love a lot your story .But i find there are a lot of things i didn't know the answer. How will Michael welcome in hell for example ? Will you write a sequel ?

I truly enjoyed reading this story. The characterization, especially Lucifer's, was just beautiful. I also loved how you made God a little bit.. well, human, actually. How you described everything; your take on this is so original.

The only thing I found disturbing is the last chapter and the epilogue's spacing, which can easily be fixed, I suppose.

There isn't a sequel to this, is there? I would totally read it.

All in all, a job well done! You should be proud of your work.

...I'm going off to read more of your stories now.

first of all i would like to say well done. i really enjoyed this and after the first few paragraphs i couldn't help thinking i read it before, do you have another website i probably stumbled across? possibly with other fiction?

anyway that's neither here nor there as my memory is anything but reliable.

i really enjoyed this piece, and i liked the bits of actual fact (such as the hierarchy of angels ect.) woven into the piece. it is an interesting spin on a fascinanting subject that is often done to death. i don't think you did that in this piece so yeys to you.

despite the actual fact (or catholic/orthodox doctrine- if thats the right word) in the story it is still clearly a work of a fiction, and certain up themselve bible bashing (my friend said i should add that ;D) anonomous (spelling?) reviewsers should get of their high horse, and look up the deffinition of FICTION in the dictionary before they force their misinformed views on the rest of us. sounds harsh, but i recently got a similar review and i was a bit like ZOMGWTFBBQ?

anyway all this basically comes down to a big ol well done, you could in fact just skip the middle rant and read this next bit:

i liked it! alot!

yours in faith,

Ayrewth

I really like this story because it makes sense in an odd-off-key way. I believe that Lucifer still loves God but that he has a job to do in Hell, which is just as necessary as Heaven.

I like the way you describe Hell in this fic. It's refreshingly original.

You built Lucifer's character - and particularly his appearance in various realms - delightfully well and with care. Leaving Michael's looks for less attention nicely emphasized the fact that the whole story was told like the reader was looking at the events over Michael's shoulder.

This is an awesome story. I like the whole 'Hell changing because of how people view it' thing. This story was well written and very intrigueing.

^_^ Wow, this story was amazing! I especially loved how you brought the end together. You're definitly a terrific writer!Oh, and I really like your theory of how hell changes as the ideas of it change. Very plausable *nodnod*

Hi there,
I was wondering if you would consider doing a sequel to at world's end? I would have liked to see more of a relationship between Michael and Lucifer. Also, I read all your works but my favorite is tears in the mirror. I feel that you could definitely turn that into some sort of series if you tried! You already have the world set up, and two sympathetic, compelling characters. I'd really like to see their story developed. Please continue to update. Thanks.

I'd just like to say that having read through the entire thing, you've created a very nice, well thought-out story with a very interesting take on the Judeo-Christian mythology. Well done :)

sweet story, very well done in giving an alternative to the human views of hell and thoughs in it. Nicely done, though i would like to know how Desirus suffered and if he ever ackowledges the truth!
-Love&Peace
-Durine

As a Catholic I should consider this blashpemey. But it is written beautifully, even the different aspect on Lucifer and his reasons for leaving Heaven. However, Hell is meant to be an absence of God and not burning flames - a place to redeem yourself in time (though does 'Time' exist in Heaven and Hell?) - the flames etc built by humans as you represented. Well done on the imaginary in creating an intriguing story.

That was a excellent ending to an excellent story. I like the fact that Michael gave up Heaven to go off with Lucifer.
All together, an amazing story. If you start any stories soon, or have any stories you want me to read, tell me so if you review a Sorcerer of Selen.
MidnightSorcerss

This is very good. What i was going to say earlier was that I saw that you werent making the devil, well, into the stereiotypical devil. Have you ever read Memnoch The Devil, by Anne Rice, by any chance. Your story reminds me of it.
Well, I will read the rest later, i gtg eat. TTYL. MidnightSorceress

I normally don't read fics that deal with angels, but for my first one, I think that this was exceedingly good. There is something I would like to say, but I will leave in until later, when I have read more.
TTYL. MidnightSorceress...

it's interesting. :) write more!!