Wow. I'm speechless. This poem is strong and sad. It's hard at times to accept the truth, that's why people run from it. I loved how you describe it.

whoa ... that was really really good. ugh, you are so good. I love how you use your words

Aw, that's so sad! It's amazing though, I really got a feeling from this. Good job!

This is great. Sad and beautiful.

Not much else to say. No critism to be found. *grin*

Oh comeone, publish a book now i command u. seriously though ur a great poetic author now WRITE MORE