I love the rhythm of this. It's quick and furious and delightfully relevent.

Is your poem proposing that religious revival/purification is the answer to our problems? It seems to me that such a thing has been attempted before.

Wow. This poem is amazing. Simple as that. Well done.

If I were a publisher, I wouldn't even have to get to the end to decide. This is a true work of art, and I'm so astounded by it that I'm left speechless.

You are the beast of poetry, That is amazing

Woah. Just... woah. Amazing. Bloody brilliant. Keep on writing!

that.was.excellent.

Wow. That took a lot of opinion and emotion to write. VERY well done. My democratic friends MUST see this...You have a wonderful sense of writing. Very appropriate for nowadays America...God, I hate this place...But still, your...ballad? maybe...whatever it is, it sings the truth.

Wow. That was amazing. You should see if you can publish that somewhere, I mean, like in a literary magazine or something along those lines. You may make a few bucks.

Wow, that was awesome. I completely agree, our country is going in a horrible direction. Powerful work.

Brilliant. Great use of parallel structure... Gods, I love this poem. I'm trying to find words to describe it and I can't. For lack of proper description- simply beautiful. -=saves to favorites list=-

This is one of the most awesome poems I've ever read. *in wonderment*

I liked your poem, and I think you're on the right track. Keep up the good work, and keep spreading the Gospel, and proclaiming His name!

you can write what i am thinking pure brilliance

..whoa. Bravo.

That was brilliant..

and it flowed perfectly..

and.. and..

..just.. wow.

I applaud you. Write on!

"And we'll reinstall Augustus, version 2.0 is great!"

Omg, that was fantastic. I loved it! best thing I've read in a long f-ckin time.