|Reviews for Lullabies Lament|
| arctic-candy 2/18/04 . chapter 1
wonderful piece. maybe if it wasn't spaced out inbetween each line i could read it better, but i really like it. i especially like the repitition of "my flowing thoughts return to you." beautiful.
| Jade Daughter of Darkness 9/11/03 . chapter 1
You wrote a love poem!
its really good acually. it shocked me when i saw this one, mainly because it was a G rating...but also because you didn't seem to be the type of person who would write a love poem. Well, you through that back in my face. i think it is really cute. keep up the good work, Cortez
| Kathryn 7/11/03 . chapter 1
i like the flow of this poem keep up the good work
| Shelila 7/1/03 . chapter 1
This is really good, the short lines make you think a lot.
| Incubabe 6/29/03 . chapter 1
This is so good.
I'm not usually one for rhyme but I enjoyed this a lot. You've got a very nice style; almost an old skool kinda thing going on. I like it a lot.
| Static Black 4/28/03 . chapter 1
Wow...Im not sure i understood it totally for it seemed to fly far beyond anything I could understand but from what I did, I think it was great. I love the way you write. Honestly Im not saying this just to make you happy or whatever but I really do admire your writings. you would have to be the best writer ive seen in quite some time. keep it up.
| COVENESS THORN 4/22/03 . chapter 1
Cool. It reminds me of some of my unposted works.
| breaker-one 4/18/03 . chapter 1
Wow, I really enjoyed this poem...it was very beautiful and poetic (well I guess it should be seeing as it's a poem lol just kidding)
| Jimmy Jazz 4/18/03 . chapter 1
Another fantastic poem.
| sirius chatham 4/18/03 . chapter 1
Wow! Real good, paints a real image, I like the rhyme scheme and everything. It fits real well. Job well done!
- Sirius -