wonderful piece. maybe if it wasn't spaced out inbetween each line i could read it better, but i really like it. i especially like the repitition of "my flowing thoughts return to you." beautiful.

OMG ((0.0))!

You wrote a love poem!

its really good acually. it shocked me when i saw this one, mainly because it was a G rating...but also because you didn't seem to be the type of person who would write a love poem. Well, you through that back in my face. i think it is really cute. keep up the good work, Cortez

i like the flow of this poem keep up the good work

This is really good, the short lines make you think a lot.

This is so good.

I'm not usually one for rhyme but I enjoyed this a lot. You've got a very nice style; almost an old skool kinda thing going on. I like it a lot.

Diana x

Wow...Im not sure i understood it totally for it seemed to fly far beyond anything I could understand but from what I did, I think it was great. I love the way you write. Honestly Im not saying this just to make you happy or whatever but I really do admire your writings. you would have to be the best writer ive seen in quite some time. keep it up.

your friend,

Static black

Cool. It reminds me of some of my unposted works.

Wow, I really enjoyed this poem...it was very beautiful and poetic (well I guess it should be seeing as it's a poem lol just kidding)

Another fantastic poem.

Wow! Real good, paints a real image, I like the rhyme scheme and everything. It fits real well. Job well done!

- Sirius -