Very sweet.
I've always been a sucker for romance, and forbidden ones are some of the best. (The greatest pleasures in life are forbidden.) and that brings me to something. You said in your bio that you love quotes? Even though this is your first piece I can tell, because it reflects off your writing.
Good work. I really enjoyed it.
Magz.
PS: That quote on that t-shirt you mentioned in your bio, I hope you believe me: I got it right away. I like to think out of the box myself. Bye.

Gosh! That's good. It's a little rough in some places, but over all, very nice.