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chickin'SOUP 2009-06-30 . chapter 1
-pause-
...wow.
Gabriel 2008-04-11 . chapter 1
Sweet, and funny!
the nerdy 2007-04-16 . chapter 1
you nailed it down. that is the perfect women.
xehno 2005-11-15 . chapter 1
Lovely. ^-^ Squee.
IceraMyst 2005-02-16 . chapter 1
I read that as "*isn't* a Democrat" and admit to some confusion. :) Cute poem. Did you get any good applicants yet? ^^ (And I can't believe you dislike Anne McCaffery. That alone ought to get you enough people lined up, but somehow everyone really seems to like her stuff. It's kind of like Mercedes Lackey-not-counting-Last-Mage-series--how on Earth do these people have a bazillion books published??)
F. Teague 2004-12-09 . chapter 1
It's been said. I know it's been said. A lot. BUT THIS IS FANTABULOUS! Really. Sorry for my, er...exuberance (yes, that's the word). There's something about it...amusing, graceful, beautiful, serendipitous... (Well, maybe not that last one, but I'm fond of the word!)~``~Can't say much else. Ja ne!~
Saraswathi R 2004-10-24 . chapter 1
I love it. Can I apply? *g*
You've got a talent for writing. Excellent work.
-Hydrangea
(By the way, are you a GAFFer? I seem to remember your pen name from somewhere...)
JazzPizza 2004-03-24 . chapter 1
Very nicely put. The lines have nice structure, and the haltingness of it puts emphasis on the meaning of the words.
Plus, this is just incredibly sweet, in some strange way. Romantic, I suppose, in a mocking sense. Wow, do I ever sound like I'm stating the obvious...anyway. Nice poem.
esotericblood 2004-01-17 . chapter 1
I like how it was organized; the words almost fell (gracefully) while it was just 1word/1 line. The poem was to the point and almost blunt, but it had power and meaning at the same time. After all, it is hard to find someone for you when you don't fall into the 'norm' or whatever -.- And if that is your preference, I applaud you for your openess! It usually takes a lot of courage to admit that to close friends, let alone declare it to the world.
TragedyLovesMisery 2003-06-12 . chapter 1
This is cute.
The Broken Princess 2003-06-04 . chapter 1
YaY for the people like you! This is so awesome! Keep writing!
*~Immortal Spirit~*
suicidel angel 2003-06-04 . chapter 1
very sweet, witty, something absolutely light, nice.
Alyx Bradford 2003-06-03 . chapter 1
This was very good -- I really liked the style and the way it flowed along. Your point was fabulous -- very heartfelt and sincere. Great job!
underjoyed 2003-06-02 . chapter 1
Oh, I do love this. The bits in brackets are an excellent touch.
charredrose 2003-05-27 . chapter 1
applause! applause! no one seems to understand the importance of PERSONALITY these days! and this is written in just the right tone. keep it up!
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