I can't believe I didn't read this!! O_O! this is beautiful! I love you! *glomps*

beautiful song really, you've got quite the talent for songwriting you know.. keep it up ^^
~R

aw! how sweet! keep writing! thats so sweet.

oh very nice, really really sweet

i could relate, at one point... *sob* lol sorry

this was really beautiful

lotsa luv
jazzo

ps thanx for reveiwing my poem, i absolutely LOVE reviews i live for them

pps and yeh, im india indian and bloody proud of it. but im also a proud aussie, so yeh :)

That's such a nice song... ooh, I really wanna hear how it goes now... Definitely a change from *shudders* Perfect Skin. A nice change...

Keep on writin!

CT...this was great. i can relate to so very well. Spur of the moment things are the greatest, and you don't need to explain yourself to anyone no matter what...that's something i'm beginning to learn myself. BTW, it's okay to let your soft side out. hehe I look forward to more writings...someday i'll get off my lazy butt and actually sit here and read everything you've written. hehe Until next time, keep writing and take care.
~Never willing to cave into others' beliefs just to fit in...Tyche Shadows~

*sniffs* this is so beautiful.. I'm actually crying! *sniffs*

nice, but I'd like to know the rhythm. keep it up hun.

Well, I read this right after "Perfect Skin", and that probably wasn't the best order to read them in. But I loved this poem. I've never really had the talent to write songs. You're really good at it though. I wish I could hear what it sounds like, though! Good job!

Aw, that's such a sweet song! You definietly have a talent for songwriting. I'd love to hear this put to music someday.

Don't jump on me for reviewing this, but I review all work whether I like the genre or not. (In any case, I don't like romance.) However, you have good organization in your writing, the flow is nice, and you have adequate writing skills, in which could be improved, but all writers are in need of improvement so this isn't necessarily to be taken as a critical remark. Keep up the good work and thank-you for reviewing my writing as well. Your thoughts and comments are appreciated.
-Gamer GX

Nice. Very sweet. =D

~Isay

It's lovely, I must say.

Very lovely emotions!
I love the feelings and love in this
very romantic piece of work, very poetic
This is so beautiful!
Great job!

great song! vert well written, sweet, sad, and beautiful. awesome job on this! keep on writing! your favorite book is Catcher in the Rye? cool. can't say it's my favorite, but i read that in english this year and it's pretty good. anyway, keep up your writing!