Not at all the sort of thing I usually read, but so well crafted that I was drawn right into it. The characterisation wsa particuarly nicely done, I thought.

Only one, very minor, criticism: I didn't particularly like having four of your chapters to each ffnet chapter (if you see what I mean) - I think more, shorter chapters would have worked better.

Interesting. :) I'm sorry I hadn't had the time to start on this piece when I said I would, but now you've got me intrigued. Michael seems like worse than a creep, and he deserves what's the getting.

However, I get the feeling that something will happen...

Interesting, good job.
luv Aims :)

Overall, it's an entertaining story. I really enjoyed it. Great job!

Very very good! I'll be back to read the rest of them.