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| iamed62 2003-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI should sign in but too tired. I love the poem. It is how i feel sometimes. You know how to capture a feeling and put it into words. that is a rare gift! |
| Kormation 2003-04-18 ch 1,  | abuseWell, its true, we all feel like this at some point in our lives. I can relate to this poem quite well, although now I'm past that part in my life. We all get over it, but we never believe it'll happen. I suppose that's where hope comes from, so yes, it will stop. I like the raw emotion that I can feel generated from the poem. -Kormation |
| locke huntsley 2003-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abusei should really log in before i review. ah, well, i'm lazy. i like this. it transimts just the right amount of emotion. the only real gripe i have with it is that, well, your thoughts of venting aren't full of bitterness and anger. and to me, a venting poem should DRIP with anger and hate. perhaps more emotional words would help. other than that, good job |