|Reviews for Feel no pain|
| me 5/14/03 . chapter 1
Not sure what's going on here - just some random images that don't tie together.
| Wrong Name Tag 5/10/03 . chapter 1
great poem. The rhyming doesn't feel forced and the lines just work really well together. Great job
| FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAd 5/7/03 . chapter 1
I GOT THE GUN JOHNY BOY. WHO's THE MAN?
| Rose Dark Thorn 5/3/03 . chapter 1
This is very good. It's really awesom.
| not sure yet 4/30/03 . chapter 1
o, i love it, the last lil line there esp, well written, excellent poem
| ylem 4/29/03 . chapter 1
Er...have you ever heard of..."surreal reality"? This reminds me of that...You know, like it's real, only it's not (I'm thinking about the cardboard trees here)...Only...It IS...because those things could be...and are...Like, it's distorted...In...DAGH I DUNNO.
Great poem, though. Very cool.
You have these strange obsessions over whacked out kids, kna'mean?
| kamikaze899 4/21/03 . chapter 1
short and sweet. i liked it..
| SinNombre26 4/19/03 . chapter 1
thats really deep and beautifully written, write more!