Not sure what's going on here - just some random images that don't tie together.

great poem. The rhyming doesn't feel forced and the lines just work really well together. Great job

Jess

I GOT THE GUN JOHNY BOY. WHO's THE MAN?

This is very good. It's really awesom.

o, i love it, the last lil line there esp, well written, excellent poem

Er...have you ever heard of..."surreal reality"? This reminds me of that...You know, like it's real, only it's not (I'm thinking about the cardboard trees here)...Only...It IS...because those things could be...and are...Like, it's distorted...In...DAGH I DUNNO.

Great poem, though. Very cool.

You have these strange obsessions over whacked out kids, kna'mean?

short and sweet. i liked it..

thats really deep and beautifully written, write more!