Reviews for as a leader of small birds

Reviews For: as a leader of small birds

ossining 2006-08-10 ch 1,	abuseWow. I seriously loved that poem. If it weren't for the weird line breaks/lengths, this would be perfect (and by weird, I mean ending with "the" and how some are really long and others are really short). Still, very funny, and I need to show this to my roommate who loves cats. Keep writing! :)
Kelpylion 2006-04-28 ch 1,	abuseI love your strange and mildly disconnected and ironic style.
Evangeline 2003-11-08 ch 1,	abuseAmazing poetry with a classic sort of feeling, but a modern style and approach. Abstract, but simple. I like this very much.
Misty Woods 2003-08-30 ch 1,	abuseThis is just wonderful! I am now doing Animal Farm for Literature. This is somewhat related to the topic. Great job! I was laughing away when I read 'then he bought a cat and the revolution was over'. I applaud you. :)
Ronin Rabbit 2003-05-01 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, the message in this poem is very kewl - if I've got it right. I like the symbolism...and quite a switch in disposition by buying that cat at the end (selling out?).
E. Gao 2003-04-30 ch 1,	abuseyour-uncle-the-vice-principal? cool. "I suppose he could have been a hero" and ii were the best parts. ^_^ ~EG
muwasser 2003-04-26 ch 1,	abusewow. That's all I have to say. I can't tell, though, is it a poem about "giving up the ghost" with regards to any great passion or to childhood specifically?
godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-04-20 ch 1,	abusehaha! love this, esp. the last stanza: "then he bought acat, and/the revolution was over" giggles well, that was inspired.
toysoldier 2003-04-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh so wonderful! this made me so happy to read it, a wonderful perspective, and of course, part ii, made me laugh so hard, this is great. (running out of synonyms for 'good' already, I'm out of practice reviewing you, it seems) T.S.
Paradoxical Goddess 2003-04-20 ch 1,	abuselaughs really hard YOU ROCK! (that is just the coolest idea EVER)

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