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| Philosophe Rouge 2003-10-21 ch 1,  | abuseLOL, I loved it (I actually liked the intensely blue-eyed enemy is Brett Hull, demon would have worked also. I actually find him pretty funny... sorry ranting) Ilya Kovalchuk will defenetely be a very big star, if he already isn't. Maybe Atlanta will win a Stanley Cup soon(only after the Canadiens though). I really loved how you wrote your poem though, it had a very smooth way to it. It was like a story but a poem, you really captured the pressure there is in a Stanley Cup game. |
| IAMED62 (sorry didn't log i... 2003-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. I don't know about them winning the cup but you never know. i think you should write that as a story. maybe jsut a rthought. It was so good. I have to go tell my friends. bye bye |
| stutter something profound 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseLol I was trying to guess who it was. At first I thought maybe Fedorov, and then Kovalev... Good poem! :D Alex |
| Princess Mulan 2003-04-20 ch 1, | abusehehehe great story. I like it Happy Easter |