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Fate Thirteen
2005-04-20
ch 1, anon.
abuse... lovely. Beautiful, gorgeously spun and wonderful.
ChickenRun
2005-01-04
ch 1,
abuseWow... That was incredible. You make me think of big swlling operatic muisc while people throw glasses at eachother - maybe that's just becaause I'm listening to All I Ask of You from The Phantom of the Opera atm, but I don't think so... Just wow. This piece screams with the very fuel you say is dead, it all just works so damn well... Jeppers
smellslikerainbows
2004-09-06
ch 1,
abuseOh, it gives me a smile just to read your words. The taste on my tongue from reading this aloud is tangy. You can't help but feel the flow, especially from "but why are people..." and on. 'Heart slam' is another delicious idea.
...and with regard to the little bitter-heart, negative "child" who commented before me, passion is what you make of it, regardless of a definition. This doesn't read like a rant to me; there's too much joy in it. Sounds like someone's projecting their jaded, constipated emotions onto another, eh, Child?
anyway, ignore my RANT, if you will. While unpolished in the beginning, this is a wonderful piece. I love it.
Delete Name
2004-04-22
ch 1,
abuseInteresting poem. What you're saying is that if you're part of something, you will rant about in the works of poetry and then say you have passion. Hmm, interesting.
Passion is expressing your ideals to share them. Ranting is expressing your ideals to make people think like you do, or biting at other people because you don't think like they do.
I'm not quite sure what this poem was.
Anyways, 9/10.
Ishuzu
2003-04-20
ch 1,
abuseNo way is the passion dead; this proves it! Kick **, cuz!
aleppine
2003-04-20
ch 1,
abuse... genius.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade
2003-04-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow.

I assure you, my friend, the passion is not dead.
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