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| Maiia A. 2008-07-15 ch 17, | abuseThats more like it! i was so angrey when she got with devon in part 1! Devon was an **! Ashton id awesome! about friggin time that they hook up! loved it! |
| g-dais 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseLoved this character Ashton from the beginning, happy to see him in the end too not to mention, love the choice of his name !! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-06-16 ch 17, | abuseI'm going to miss Sophie and Ashton after this. I loved her character and Ashton ... well, he just rocked. I didn't really like how Ashton kind of just blurted out everything in the end without a flaw. It didn't seem that real to me. The drama didn't really match up that well either. Like that John dude. Random, much? He did sound cute though. :) I think you should make a story for Lor and Griff just because it seems like it would be fun to read. Really good job :) I personally liked the alternate/continuation more than the original ending. Then again, I was rooting for Ashton. :) |
| randieskins 2008-06-06 ch 17, | abuseAw. |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-04-30 ch 17, | abusehiya this is really good. i was confused at the end of all about you the first one. I really like this alot. This one more than all about you. In all about you at times i foudn it confusing because Sophie would be talking to Ryan. then straight away it changed to Ryan and Devon. But i like how you did this last chapter in all about you part 2 where you put in lines so it shows when the scene had changed. Great writing. Angel |
| Carol 2008-02-26 ch 17, anon. | abuseIn all seriousness, I scared myself when i saw your latest update date on this story. It was marked.. well more than a year ago and I thought you didn't finish this story. I let out a sigh of relief once i went to the drop bar and saw "El Fin." Fwosh. I'm so happy ^^ |
| PUDGYmeHAPPY 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI actually love this story :) . Now, I liked both guys in the story. Devon and Ashton. Both different personalities but both in love with Sophie. I love both stories BECAUSE it relates to life. I mean, there are stories where people just stick together throughout like, 10 years? OH come on! Get a reality check, you know? But yours :) man boy oh boy, it just shows that your first love can't always be the one. I love how there were drama flicks here and there, but always a happy ending. Cause I personally believe that. Even if your lifes a skrew up sucker, might as well make the best of it. I actually love it. I could see that your writing developed throughout the years. Hopefully, I'll improve too. :) Happy writings. |
| toazdo 2008-01-03 ch 17, | abuseYay!! I have to say that this is my favourite of the two stories. It's not that the first one was bad because it was great! Well written nd I loved it but I also wanted Ashton to get together with Sophie and now they're finally together so YAY!! I've just spent the whole day reading both stories and I have to say that I was completely hooked! For most of this story I hated Sophie for being so oblivious but it's good now..they're together and that's what matters.. Thanks for writing these great stories! |
| pretitiful 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseoh yeah!! ashton is more involved in this story then the first part. yeah =) and... i cannot believe devon. how can he be engaged? oh well... |
| Steph. 2007-12-25 ch 17, anon. | abuseI loved this story, I seriously do. This story is so filled with drama and plot twists, it drove me crazy. In the end I'm very happy seeing as I was rooting for Ashton the whole time so wow I just really liked to thank you for this story. -Steph. P.S: Sorry for my rambling, I'm not the reviewing-type XD |
| Rimi 2007-12-17 ch 17, anon. | abuseI love it...too much! For my own good...I think. It's splendid, fantastic and fabulous! |
| middiegurl08 2007-12-14 ch 17, | abuseOkay, I've spent the last couple of days reading this story, both parts and I fell in love. There were so many times I was hoping for Sophie and Devon, and the Sophie and Ashton, and then Sophie and Ryan. You wrote her so well with all of them that I couldn't pick a favorite. But the closer the story got to ending, I couldn't wait to see where things went with Ashton and I just wanted them to admit to each other how they really felt. Anyway, this was a great story and I'm sad to have reached the end. Thanks for sharing it with us! :) |
| Maria Minamino 2007-12-07 ch 17, | abuseI just spent the last 24 hours reading the first story and now this. I must say - I LOVE THIS STORY. I'm so glad you added a sequel and stuck her with Ashton instead of Devon. I never liked Devon - and Ashton was just so sweet to her! I was so sad when she got together with Devon in the end of the first story - but I was delighted when I started reading the second story to find her with Ashton instead! Favorite character: Ashton Favorite scene: The last one when they finally get together Why you read this: I found it seraching for a new fic to read and I love it! Why you liked this, if you liked it: It was a great story - thanks for writing! |
| hunnie.bunnie.x3 2007-11-26 ch 17, | abusewowowowow. I have to say, i LOVE Ashton. Favorite character. Though i like Ryan too. Well, i liked all guy characters. Actually, i just like all the characters period. i LOVED this story cuz i really thought that Sophie belonged with Ashton. howw perfect XD |
| SapphireEyes16 2007-10-27 ch 17, | abusei read the on first aay and i wanted her 2 be with ashton, so i'm glad u ended the story like this, and i really think u should write a another story but about john. |