|Reviews for All About You Part II|
| water block 6/12/05 . chapter 8
this was fun. Jon, the sex god, is interested in Sophie-aww, so cute!
And, yay, get to hear fun and embarrasing stories!
| Water Block 6/12/05 . chapter 7
I really liked the shock effects in this chapter. Griffin seems pretty cool (is he ALSO crushing on Sophie?)
Sorry to hear that your AP US history experience was not pleasant. Actually, due to notes and tests (and work in general) my experience in that class was not that enjoyable, either. The only salvation was that my History teacher (for both AP US, and AP European history-same teacher) rocked, so he made the learning easier, and fun
I really am enjoying this sequal, and am so happy that she WIll end up with the correct person (but sad/angry that Devon is such a complete ass. I hope they humiliate him some how!)
| water block 6/12/05 . chapter 6
I just got done watching "Ever After," and a line in this reminded me of a line in the movie:
"Um...so don't you think it's only fair that I get to find out what your weakness is?"
When he stopped he looked at me with those eyes and said to me with complete sincerity, "You."
Which is a fun little scene in both!
| Water Block 6/12/05 . chapter 5
(just doing this to mark my place)
But also because I have a question.
Will we be seeing Devon, his slut LIsa, Marsha, or Ryan(esp. Ryan) in this story? I want Ashton to kick Devon's ass, and for him to be miserable, and Ryan to have deserted him! (harsh, but HEY! He was a bastard!)\Ohh! Thanks again for being great and finishing this story!
| Water bLock 6/12/05 . chapter 1
Thank God! I made a mistake! (see, I am SO willing to admit that, when wonderful, nicey-nice stories are involved!)
I would continue reading this 'nummy treat, but it is 3:54 am, and I have to get up and go to the laundro-mat in a few hours with parental unit and sister unit.
Yay!(to the story, not the early wakage!)
| meyna 5/30/05 . chapter 17
This is an amazing story. I read both parts of it. I loved Ashton. The relationship between Ashton and Sophie was too fast in the last few chapters but I loved all of it.
| betalight 5/24/05 . chapter 17
I think I liked reading this story because it was so nice to read something with a good ending, and I could really beleive in the characters. Some of the denial stuff was a bit crazy, but it was cool how everything ended up working together.
| Dancer of Dreams 5/15/05 . chapter 17
That was f*in fantastic. I loved it soo soo much. THe characters the everythin. O god i just spent like half a day reading 1 & 2 and you are amazing. You are now My FAVOURITE author and i cant wait till you publish a book. Write more cannot wait to read whatever you have to say. Officially your biggest fan.
| Raspberry Ginger 5/15/05 . chapter 17
Wow... this was... an ordeal. I've spent the past two days reading this story obsessively. It's scary... I've neglected school, exercise, sleep, FOOD to finish it... It's like a drug! I really loved it, the characters are amazing and the story drew me in so deepy that I felt like I was there, like I was one with Sophie. She grew up so much in this story, after Devon. I'm so proud of her for everything she did, of all the characters for growing up. I loved her and Devon together, but I loved her and Ashton even more! They are so beautiful together... I'm so happy. :D :D :D This story is amazing, thanks so much for writing it! You RULE!
| Raomina 5/14/05 . chapter 17
This story is so enlightening. I really like Ashton and I like it the way you make them both doubt each other but still managed to get together at the end. It's really romantic and sounds a lot like true love. However, Sophie is meant to be this shy girl that has little guy friends, right? Well, she seems to get on really well with everyone, especially the guys, and is really close to most of them. So I am wondering if you've changed her personality halfway through the story. Not that it's bad, of course, Sophie's character is very refreshing. Oh, and I think you need an epilogue for this. You know, to tie the knots. What happened to Devon, Donny, Justin, Lisa...etc. most of your characters that seemed to have just disappeared.
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story, the plot and all, ( I came across this story through someone's favourites) and I'm glad I've spent my time reading it.
| euphorix 5/4/05 . chapter 1
OMG Loved the sequel! Its really really goos and Ashton is soo soo soo sweet! Thanks for writing it, had fun reading it (and am no swooning over Ashton). ) YOU ROCK!
| Rashmi 4/19/05 . chapter 17
Favorite character-Ashton of course! He's so sweet and he's was always there for Sophie. Not to mention he's incredibly hott. -
Favorite scene-Any scene where Ashton and Sophie kissed/were about kiss/did something romantic (I'm so hopeless...)
Why you read this-I read the first one
Why you liked this, if you liked it-I a sap for romance stories and love this genre of writing. Plus, you have a talent for writing. A lot of time and effort went into this story and it shows.
| joank 4/17/05 . chapter 15
It was really quick. I thought it would be considered insensitive on Ash's part to have sex with Sophie at that time, just when she found out who she lost her virginity to. I really want them to get together but that moment seemed a bit inappropriate. No wonder she a good story overall though, looking foward to your new stories.
| joank 4/16/05 . chapter 1
I love it! I love it!
| keshakeke 4/16/05 . chapter 17
Favorite charcacter-AshtonFavorite scene-the rainscene where ashton was driving awayWhy I read this- because i loved the first part and couldnt resist not reading this halfWhy I liked it-you have a gift you can write something and bring a reader into your universe, you have a good gift and I would die if I could write like youWhy I Didnt like it-um. ... .excusemebut I LOVED IT