Aw, this seems so good. The choppy storytelling makes it hard to understand, but the plot seems promising. You've introduced a lot of characters, and I'd like to see where you go with this. Loves and update soon! ^^

The writing in the excerpts reminds me strongly of The Silmarillion by Tolkein (though the language here is by far easier to read). You're not about to create a world like Middle Earth now, are you? ;) Actually, there are notable differences. Your "gods" are much kinder, for one. You have a very intriguing set-up and write very well. I'm interested, without a doubt!

This is great. I could see this being published if your work continues to be as good as it seems to be from this chapter.

Ne! I love it! Continue!

though this is a year old... um.. *pops up* im interested!

Oh wow... I'm almost speechless. This is a fascinating story! You subtly give us readers tidbits of precious information until we're so ensnared that we /have/ to keep reading! I really hope you update this story soon. You have a flair that I haven't seen in many at FictionPress, and I'll be waiting to see how you continue this marvelous and intriguing plot.
~Cinaed

You know, this would have been a really great NaNo piece. ^__^ *grins* I like it, so far. I'll read the first chapter tomorrow or Wednesday.

I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews...its fantastic! I'm so incredibly curious to know what's going to happen next, and with your kind of mythical style and excellent description, its really a joy to read. Please continue!

i am DEFINITELY interested. although things are a bit hard to understand at this point. it spunds very, very promising though.

Of course people are interested! I am at least and I'm sure others are to. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what you do with your characters and world.

Ah! I love it! I'm more than a little dazed and confused but hopefully everything will clear up. PLEASE write more!

Confusing, but I'm sure that's just because it's a prologue. And it's a *great* prologue.

You have an amazing mind; I love how you can come up with stuff like this. It's original and interesting.

I can't wait to see more of the characters. Characters are, after all, the best thing about a fic. ^_^ And I can already tell this will be fun.

~ D-chan