Very nice. One of your best works, I must say. And I know I've read this before, I've just never had the chance to review it.
And it hasn't really slipped away... it's just too busy with school and work (starting Monday at FYE. W00T!) to be around much.

You know, you have a real talent for poetry. You should write more than you have posted! From what I've seen, you definitely have great potential to write great music and poetry. Keep it up!

uh...is this about optimism by any chance? I could just be too high on insomnia to get it, I'm not sure. hehe

hmm...that's a nice one...but I think there could have been clearer ways to say what u mean..it's simply lovely, none the less

Beautifully written, I love how you've repeated "For it lies in the heart in the soul", it's really effective. Keep writing!

so true.. loved it ^^