Hey you oh thankz for reviewing my poem, I know what you mean familiar no longer looks like a word, it's a bit simple for me to but I thought I needed a break from my usual angsty depressing stuff! But hey whatever floats your bic... my bic just wrote on it's own on that one! Anyway enough of moi... I don't even know where to start to on reviewing this poem of yours, I mean only one word comes to mind... AMAZING! Amazing in every single way, you manage to touch on so many thoughts and feelings... I love how you manage to show how it's people that make you what are and how they affect you! And you structure the poem excellently as each verse is individual but links and flows on from the one before... it just has that compact and yet flowy feel to it which you don't find in many poems! The use of paranoia and fear is used beautifully and really emphasises what your trying to say... in short the poem is just well bloody fantastic and even more so because I feel I can really relate to what you're saying! Well until next time you genius you... See ya ^_^

Cool stuff. Very true to our culture also. YOu make a good point about how others make us who we are. I like the spirit you muster by saying 'I'm not afraid of leaving you behind'. Lots of meaning, really liked it.

Wow. I like that song. It alot like feelings I have for certain people I'm supposedly related to. It's a little repetitive. But it's good.
~Mika

oh very nice

u can feel the emotion flowing right through it

lotsa luv
jazzo

ps thanx for reviewing me

Beautiful. There's a deeper message to this after you read the last stanza. Nice rhythm, as well.
~Cael

interesting, like it though, well written, nicely done

it's good, very, very good...(i'm not really in the mood for long reviews)

Nice.

I like this a lot, great job!

nice. The avid repition makes you not read as closely (almost missed that last line) but i like yer message.

To be quite honest, I didn't feel like reading this. You're good and all, but I'm not in a thinking mood. But I accidently clicked on the link, and then made another boo-boo: I read the first line. And I kinda couldn't stop! (That's good)

This is excellent. Very powerful and emotional. Well written. Good job.

This was really powerful. Keep up the good work.


~Heart of the Sword