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| Doll Face 2003-12-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was a really good story, except for some details. She was six when she got hooked on the drugs?? There is no way that could have happened! I mean seriously. Other than that it was good. I can relate to the feeling that no one cared, that no one could help. I am sure someone has felt that way |
| Hurleychic12 2003-12-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseAww that is soo sad!! but then happy since he lived! good work!! |
| ColorCrayons 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abusethat is so totally sad. it really is. The Trail of Tears is so depressing. it was a good idea tho and u wrote it well. u may wanna split it into more paragraphs however. ~color outside the lines~ ps if ur ever bored, could u read my fic Storm of Dreams? u dont gotta, only if ur bored |
| Violet Princess 2003-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad, and what's even sadder is that it's true... |