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Doll Face
2003-12-05
ch 6, anon.
abuseThat was a really good story, except for some details. She was six when she got hooked on the drugs?? There is no way that could have happened! I mean seriously. Other than that it was good. I can relate to the feeling that no one cared, that no one could help. I am sure someone has felt that way
Hurleychic12
2003-12-05
ch 4, anon.
abuseAww that is soo sad!! but then happy since he lived! good work!!
ColorCrayons
2003-07-15
ch 1,
abusethat is so totally sad. it really is. The Trail of Tears is so depressing. it was a good idea tho and u wrote it well. u may wanna split it into more paragraphs however.

~color outside the lines~

ps if ur ever bored, could u read my fic Storm of Dreams? u dont gotta, only if ur bored
Violet Princess
2003-04-21
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sad, and what's even sadder is that it's true...
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