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| Rosepetal/Rosethorn 2003-06-29 ch 1,  | abuseMy dear, beautiful friend Sparrow. You truly know how to place emotion into your stories. And wonderfully dark beauty, this one is. It makes me want to cradle the poor angel in my arms and tell her everything will be all right. |
| Mountain Peak 2003-04-22 ch 1, | abuseWow That's really powerful It's beautiful. I love how you made it pretty depressing, and then brought in a strong feeling of hope. Keep writing. |
| Winged One1 2003-04-22 ch 1, | abuseWell, you say you can't write poetry for crap...and I don't believe you. It's odd. I love fallen angels, and I've never read a bad fallen angel poem yet. Good job continuing that record. >winged one |
| SoulessDevil 2003-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this poem. It shows how a person that is made fun of and laughed at can feel and think, even if they are an angel like in your poem. |