|Reviews for Ordire Ad Fines|
| Weezer is my lover 12/12/04 . chapter 1
i like, its makes u think (which is good)..nicely done!
| DaughterofMidnight 7/17/04 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that was beautiful. It wasn't until the end I realized that everything was moving backwards.
| MelodyReiterLee 4/21/03 . chapter 1
Sounds like a cool poem. I like the way you set the tone and use description. Good job. You could improve by possibly separating stanzas.
I just have one questions. Umm, is this poem about you?