I love all your stories and I've been reading them for a while. I've never reviewed before, but I love your writing style. I am finally reviewing so that I can beg you to finish this story. These characters are like some of the people I know in real life. It has definitely had me cracking up more than once.
If there was a movie star out there like Baxter, maybe I'd actually fork out to see a movie in theaters.

wow!! this story is amazing! I love the way it's written (obviously! or I wouldn't think that it was fabulous) i know it's been more than a couple of years but...
please. please please update?


p.s Bax and Zima's chemistry rocks.

p.p.s Zima is lovably sarky

I was planning on leaving a review saying something along the lines of 'please keep writing this story, you stopped just when it was getting really interesting *puppy dog eyes*' but I can see that other people have already tried that so maybe reverse psychology will work.

Don't update again because if you do I definitely won't read it and I definitely won't love every word of it. *shifty eyes* Definitely not!

What is the site called? It sounds interesting and fun.

when will you update this again? I think you ought to. It is your duty... just kidding, but you should.

Take care and I DO HOPE YOU UPDATE

Hey! Are you going to finish this story!?!? I mean I like the others too, but this and a few older ones are still incomplete and I'm SO curious!

...you're doing the not-updating thing again... *poke* please update soon?

I really like Zimi she's an awesome main character and this story is really interesting, especially the concept of it. I hope you update soon.

wow! you updated! i had almost lost hope!

I was wondering when you're going to update.

Well, that sounds like a bad bout of luck, but I'm thrilled that you're back! Good piece, I had to go back and re-read the part with Nala and the cocaine a few times, but eventually picked it up. Keep it up!

ohmygawd you updated. THANK YOU. and i'm sorry to hear about KatRita and the broken bones and stuff... but you seem to have picked your muse perfectly. if i didn't know there was a three-year-break i wouldn't be able to notice a difference between chapers. ^^ i'm so happy you're still working on this...

I first read this story on your website. Didn't know there was this whole mystery thriller premise thing going on and that you had a whole bunch more chapters written already. I've been checking the website for updates but that's obviously the wrong place =PAnyway, glad to see you continue it and hope to see more soon. Especially since you're done with the setup and moving on to the meat!!

awesome.great story.

Yikes! I'm so sorry that you had to go through that. I really like this story, and I hated seeing it end on a cliffhanger, so I'm so happy to see it updated and I hope you will continue to update it.