Your imagery in this is amazing simply amazing. I do admit it almost reminds me of some sort of elvish place like it should belong in LotR.

Thanks for the review.

Gee, this is wonderful. I could almost feel that I was in Xaretha. You have good skills at creating beautiful images. Good job. _

I like this! The imagery is fantastic! winged one

Wow. You must have spent a long time on this. You did an amazing job describing this world and it is amazing how vivid it is.

good job. i liked it. plz review me 2! I'm The Kid 118 and my poems are called scratch and the sequal scratched. read scratch first or else scratched won't make any sense to u obviously.