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| Reviews for White Brick |
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   autumn berrington 7/20/06 . chapter 1well written work! it seems to be more of a story than poem but its great none the less. Autumn |
| D 6/7/05 . chapter 1 Passionate.D. |
| IHavePizza 9/10/04 . chapter 1 I like it. I'm not 100% I like it but I like it. I'm espically captivated by the last two lines. |
| i-kill-4-fun 8/29/04 . chapter 1 wow. |
| Sleep-Not 8/27/04 . chapter 1 You're not? I beg to differ! |
| Soviet 8/25/04 . chapter 1 I can see the emotion... but the poem doesn't make me feel the emotion... so in my mind this is mediocre |
| Finding Autumn 8/8/04 . chapter 1 you're right, you're not a good writer. you are a great writer, and it's your rebellions against the conventions of traditional writing as well as the subtle restraint of knowing when to cross the line that makes your work so beautiful. please keep writing. |
| quietdrama22 7/6/03 . chapter 1 Sort of confusing,for me anyways, but if you really focus on thr poem... you get it. All in all, it is a good poem, very emotionful. Keep writing : |
| shortalee 6/1/03 . chapter 1 Tear...U go girl! |
| short 5/17/03 . chapter 1 wow that is so sad! Shows emothion. I liked it alot. |
