good poem i like it

VERY GOOD! everything fits rite into place! :O) Plz R&R me if you're free!
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Great poem. Awesome job.

Liked it, not what I would call a poem. But I don't know what I would called it anyway... maybe a thouth?

hmm...yep, that's interesting, kew how u ended on a question...despite lack of questio mark...

Ohh, I love this one! It's so small but it says so much, like an optimistic little child looking up at me. I love it, I love it, I love it. It's like a little prayer I could carry around in my pocket.
And trying is all that's important! For in what do we succeed if we do not try? Whether or not we finish a task is completely besides the point. The point is that we tried our best and we gave our all and we achieved an inner peace with ourselves.
Hum, hum. *tilts face up to the sunlight to smile at its caressing warmth*

m~* Sunflower, anyone?

wow, powerful.

^^ *smiles* i like your writing style. I admire the fact that you don't let form limit your poems. *thumbs up* yay you! :D Read mine? :) thanks. ^^

You tried at least. I might not ^^.

Wow, great, kinda haunting...

Short, but definitely interesting. And now I feel I must go and finish my story chapter.

Nice!

I only have one criticism, which is that you switched tenses part way through.

hm... yeah cool! its different frm ur other poems... variety is good! short yet powerful...

short as you said, but extremely powerful, i love the way you set up the poem and the style, its different, which is good, very sad too, beautifully done

ok im speachless