|Reviews for Last Breath|
| darkmiko 7/19/05 . chapter 1
good poem i like it
| Summerdazed 8/13/03 . chapter 1
VERY GOOD! everything fits rite into place! :O) Plz R&R me if you're free!
| endless040 7/17/03 . chapter 1
Great poem. Awesome job.
| Grendel 7/17/03 . chapter 1
Liked it, not what I would call a poem. But I don't know what I would called it anyway... maybe a thouth?
| Katterree Fengari 7/12/03 . chapter 1
hmm...yep, that's interesting, kew how u ended on a question...despite lack of questio mark...
| Sunflower Philosophy 5/26/03 . chapter 1
Ohh, I love this one! It's so small but it says so much, like an optimistic little child looking up at me. I love it, I love it, I love it. It's like a little prayer I could carry around in my pocket.
And trying is all that's important! For in what do we succeed if we do not try? Whether or not we finish a task is completely besides the point. The point is that we tried our best and we gave our all and we achieved an inner peace with ourselves.
Hum, hum. *tilts face up to the sunlight to smile at its caressing warmth*
m* Sunflower, anyone?
| Artemis Astralstar 5/22/03 . chapter 1
| midnight dreams 5/21/03 . chapter 1
*smiles* i like your writing style. I admire the fact that you don't let form limit your poems. *thumbs up* yay you! :D Read mine? :) thanks.
| Psycho-kyugurl 5/16/03 . chapter 1
You tried at least. I might not .
| triskaidekaphobia 5/16/03 . chapter 1
Wow, great, kinda haunting...
| Werecat99 5/15/03 . chapter 1
Short, but definitely interesting. And now I feel I must go and finish my story chapter.
| The Lady of Shallott 5/11/03 . chapter 1
I only have one criticism, which is that you switched tenses part way through.
| Yvonne 5/9/03 . chapter 1
hm... yeah cool! its different frm ur other poems... variety is good! short yet powerful...
| not sure yet 5/4/03 . chapter 1
short as you said, but extremely powerful, i love the way you set up the poem and the style, its different, which is good, very sad too, beautifully done
| nimue webweaver 5/2/03 . chapter 1
ok im speachless