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| darkmiko 2005-07-19 ch 1,  | abusegood poem i like it |
| Summerdazed 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abuseVERY GOOD! everything fits rite into place! :O) Plz R&R me if you're free! =summerdazed= |
| endless040 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Awesome job. |
| Grendel 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseLiked it, not what I would call a poem. But I don't know what I would called it anyway... maybe a thouth? |
| Katterree Fengari 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusehmm...yep, that's interesting, kew how u ended on a question...despite lack of questio mark... |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseOhh, I love this one! It's so small but it says so much, like an optimistic little child looking up at me. I love it, I love it, I love it. It's like a little prayer I could carry around in my pocket. And trying is all that's important! For in what do we succeed if we do not try? Whether or not we finish a task is completely besides the point. The point is that we tried our best and we gave our all and we achieved an inner peace with ourselves. Hum, hum. *tilts face up to the sunlight to smile at its caressing warmth* m~* Sunflower, anyone? |
| Artemis Astralstar 2003-05-22 ch 1, | abusewow, powerful. |
| midnight dreams 2003-05-21 ch 1, | abuse^^ *smiles* i like your writing style. I admire the fact that you don't let form limit your poems. *thumbs up* yay you! :D Read mine? :) thanks. ^^ |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseYou tried at least. I might not ^^. |
| triskaidekaphobia 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, great, kinda haunting... |
| Werecat99 2003-05-15 ch 1, | abuseShort, but definitely interesting. And now I feel I must go and finish my story chapter. |
| The Lady of Shallott 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseNice! I only have one criticism, which is that you switched tenses part way through. |
| Yvonne 2003-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusehm... yeah cool! its different frm ur other poems... variety is good! short yet powerful... |
| not sure yet 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseshort as you said, but extremely powerful, i love the way you set up the poem and the style, its different, which is good, very sad too, beautifully done |
| nimue webweaver 2003-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseok im speachless |