Reviews for What You Can't Have

Reviews For: What You Can't Have

Dartxni 2005-03-18 ch 1,	abuseInteresting character study. I was recently chastized about being too gay myself. It's just that you can use it as a personality sometimes, when your unsure of what exactly you should say in social situations.
hydra-star1 2003-10-28 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot. You did a really good job. It's intresting and doesn't go to fast. You added in just enough detal to make it so that I could picture what was going on, bt not so much that it bored me senceless. And bealive me, you don't want to see when I'm bored, I go a bit... Inasne, I guess. Achually, that's a bit of an understatment. But anyway, great fic. You did a great job. keep it up. Hydra-Star
itsamudthang 2003-09-06 ch 1,	abuseI like your story. I am looking forward to the updates.
K.L. Dreary 2003-08-16 ch 1,	abuseOh I like! 10/10! Write more soon please!! ThE tRees On FiRe! ThE tRees On FiRe! LeTs All jUmP iN thE FiRe In ThE tRee!
obsidian-flame 2003-08-15 ch 1,	abuseWhy didn't I review this when I first read it? It's very good, and I'd be really interested to know how you're going to handle what happens next. Maybe Sarah'll get down off her soapbox and realise Mike's a great guy after all... or maybe he'll have to get it through his skull that his Y chromosome is inhibiting things!! write more!
WizardPhish 2003-08-12 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this one! It was funny and it made me look into this chapter further. Why is Sarah like that? Why is she convinced every boy is hitting on her? What does she use her sexuality as an "excuse"? Oh, btw, thanks for the review. I loved it. I'm ussally not into writing really sad stories, but the thought came to me and I had to write it. I'm going to read a few of your other stories as well. Happy Writing! -Len
Socially Inept Kitchen Boy 2003-08-09 ch 1,	abuseI like this. It has a really original plot, which you don't see all the time.
Illandaria 2003-08-02 ch 1,	abuseAgain, very nice--though it could've used a few touch-ups. But I like the characters. Are you going to do more with this?
Little Mermaid 2003-04-28 ch 1,	abuseo...good start. i'm intrigued. update asap
Ameliebabie 2003-04-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really great beginning. You've set the scene really well, got us into the characters and began the plot!! And it's a plot I haven't come across before so ace on the originality side. Mike seems like an interesting character, and I can't wait to get to know Sarah more...what happened to her... I hope you keep this up! Amelie xx

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