Wow...I loved the end of this! Particularly the fact that in one way it was happy, but it wasn't the corny happy ending that you might expect. Amazing...Plus the song's pretty funny, if you don't mind my saying.

Such a sad note to end it on.. But I muct admit, I loved the fries part. ^^*

:blinkblink: What an amazing person ya are, to put up something like this, and have it come out so well. :D GO YOU! Keep working on this, as youve got me very curiose on this...

Hmm... I wonder what's wrong with him. I mean, you make it sound like he's been turned into a vampire at the end of the first bit, but that doesn't seem to be the case in the second bit (though at the beginning of the second chapter you wonder if Mike was the one who made him into a vampire)... I dunno. It's confuzzling. o.O I'm not sure what's happening, but I'd like to find out. ^_~
Also, thank you for your reviews of 'Elements', 'Ending?', and 'Heartmage' - and thanks for the notes you made on my verb tenses; you had legit complaints. Thanks. ^_^

I reveiwed the first chapter already and I loved it. I love the second one too and I really do hope you continue VERY soon!! ( : Thanx so much for emailing me about the 2nd chapter. Please feel free to do so again for the next one! So why is Jones so depressed and angry in this story. What exactly happened in the May of 2002? I love the story but I wna get all the gacts straight. Later daze, hon. keep up the good writing!

I like your story, very mysterious and I'd like to read more! Jones kind of gets on my nerves a bit though, being so depressed, but that could just be because I don't know why.

oh wow. Honestly! my favorite band is SILVERCHAIR, and your story reminds me so much of the lead singer it's scary!( : I'd just like to say you did a superb job on it and keep it up!

Quite weird, but interesting. I'm wondering what's wrong, and where you're going to go with this, if you are. Hmm. ^_^ I like it.
Also, thanks muchly for the "Shadowstorm" review!

People cant help being depressed! Your the wanker!