Ouch... note to self never cross a werewolf! Scary stuff! Though I'm not sure she deserved to die, maybe he should have just turned her and then who is she going to tell? But that was creative.

ahahaha she deserved that she was an ubber **...hey do you think you can expand on Riley's character more? I'm interested in hearing about him

It's very createive and neat..thats all I can say about it..