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do-i-exist 2006-07-06 . chapter 1
Once again, a very well written piece. I go to school with the same type of people, who I happen to find really annoying. I hate to say this because I am a girl, but females, at least the ones that I know, are really annoying. I am incredibly glad that when I started going to middle school, I didn't know anyone and was quite shy, so I didn't get absorbed into the teen culture **. I used to be teased, but now most people have the decency to leave me alone.

Anyway, I found this interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. Very good writing.
Quiet City 2006-06-11 . chapter 1
you are not my hero and you don't use this anymore but someone asked me to find it for them and so i read it again, and i really wish i'd know you longer.
The10thWeasley 2005-09-02 . chapter 1
you are my hero!
David Stephen 2005-08-07 . chapter 1
I've just read Stupidity Must Be Some Kind of Chronic Illness, and I have to say - it was brilliant. You have a flare to write amusing pieces which make people laugh, or indeed, cry. All other comments aside, this is a great piece. Well done, Radyn. ~DS~
thedarkthatiwas 2005-02-24 . chapter 2
Lol, this is really funny. I like! Quite interesting too, in a hilarioous sort of way!Thanks for review also, I do appreciate constuctive criticism. I don't actually think you would need experimental data for comp databases, but I can't be 100% sure.
Rio Madeira 2005-02-22 . chapter 1
I, too, am a short angry Jew who likes to make cracks about the American governmental system. Go, me. Go, all of us. On the other hand, I would have been that way if I was of any other religion . . .

But back to the essay: Not bad, not bad at all. I don't know if your school has an advanced program, but if it does, I'd like to see your take on the "caste system" in high-school society, i.e. advanced vs. regular.
logical-unreason 2004-12-05 . chapter 1
"FP's most popular writer. 4730 and 1/2 people can't be wrong!

I'm so great."

That's actually pretty damn funny.

Touche.
scapegrace 2004-08-30 . chapter 2
Seriously, how old are you?
scapegrace 2004-08-30 . chapter 1
Hehe. Very entertaining and (mostly) true. The grade sevens have to be the most irritating life forms on the planet right about now. Especially since I'll be returning to them in *gasp* 2 days!
It does seem as if all girls have friends, doesn't it? I have to say that was the main error in your rant-type-essay-thing was that. There aren't many, but there are indeed nerdy outcast girls who wouldn't mind hanging out in a dank basement playing KOTOR for half the day. Ah, well. I guess that's your school, eh?
Lauren Raven 2004-07-31 . chapter 2
Lol...this is great. Awesome job, keep writing.
Lauren Raven 2004-07-31 . chapter 1
Wow. First time I don't fit into one of your groups. Awesome. Futurama does rock, I'm so ** off they canceled it...bad people at Fox. Futurama was awesome. Simpsons is great too, so is Family Guy.
. . . . . . . . . 2004-06-10 . chapter 1
I feel sorry for anyone who KNOWS you. they probably want to jump on a plain to Switzerland, join a monestary and never think of you again!
Katsuhiro 2004-06-04 . chapter 2
Heh, Macbeth is prophesised to rule all of Scotland, not England. Even so, hilarious shite here. And yes, that's shite in the good sense.
And now, I shall attempt to relate the most important thing I learned while studying Greek tragedies this year: the letter 'j' is written identical to 'i', and the letter 'v' is similarly written identical to 'u'.
Suddenly, and without warning, the words Uagjna and Penjs take on a whole new significance.
Katsuhiro 2004-06-04 . chapter 1
YOU HAVE NO CHANCE TO SURVIVE MAKE YOUR TIME!
noplace4me4469 2004-04-23 . chapter 2
wow this was really good although i may not agree with the views you have stated it is simply your opinion and how things are where you live but i enjoyed reading this and there are some things i'm sure everyone can agree on in there ^_^
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