Reviews for Blurring the Line

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MoonlightWings13 2008-01-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseWell, having read one, I couldn't just stop there! This story might not be quite as good as the last one... Although it was mostly just the first chapter I didn't like; but it's still fantastic! I wish you'd write more; I truly do.
umm...awestruck reader (poi... 2006-10-08 ch 4, anon.	abuseah! i love your stories, both this one and Game Over! but, but, but...why haven't you updated in so long!?!?! wails the little excerpt in Edges of Reality hinted at some stuff i've been really anticipating in this story (guilty confession). i hope you haven't dropped any of your stories. they really are among the better few i've read. oh merciful Aphrael, spare us the agony of waiting any longer and UPDATE! please?
Shadesome 2006-08-09 ch 4,	abuseI like this. I think it would be good if you wrote some more. it's always ood to go back on oldstories, and this is lovely.
Lady Psychic 2006-04-29 ch 4,	abuseThis is an interesting story. I like the premese and loved what I have read so far. I hope you will eventually pick this story back up again.
Yoyo-chan 2005-12-07 ch 4,	abuseI think you should pick this back up. Even if they're too young for anything to happen (and they are... that's the only thing I don't like) the premise is so interesting.
Nikerym 'Ksherea 2005-05-22 ch 4,	abuse::pokes the story:: i hope it's not dead! I really really really like it. there are too few stories out there that are fantasy/sci-fi and slash. this is a good 'un though, very intriguing. characters: brian seems to be taking it as well as can be expected, the whole borderlands thing, then his attraction to omen. i'm impressed by his smarts, er, sort of. books make you knowledgeable, and it's good to see he can actually apply that knowledge when it comes to real-life (heh) situations such as Cet's. omen's a cutie, though i bet he's got to be a bit jealous at the attention brian's givin' cet. i've got this inkling he's got something to do with the whole gods thing being reborn, which puts me in mind of of similar questions that i'm dying to have answered. i like his penchant for stories, and how he gets all possesive (sort of) "And you owe me more stories - don't forget." cet and aedwen's situation is interesting, as well as what's going to happen with those two. nice to see someone appreciating brian instead of calling him stupid all the time. in any case, that's intriguing as well, especially with the stolen relic. anyway, it's a wonderful story, and i do hope you write/post more of it, for it would be a great travesty for it to die where it lays. hope you update soon (ish)
futago>akuma-tenshi01 2005-04-18 ch 4,	abuseInterestin' story!
xinder 2005-03-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseXD Such a great story~! XD Please update soon~ XD I love the slashiness~
Lyeka 2005-01-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseHi. Great story. Hope you'll update it soon.
Kitten of Rain 2004-11-12 ch 4,	abuseack. nuu! bad cliff-hanger. I want to know what happens! (LOVE this, btw. very well written, and the fact that the boy's name is 'Omen' is just cool)
r.mai 2004-08-07 ch 4,	abuseoh shiznittzle... there'll be explaining to do... if they're allowed a chance to explain at all... very interesting... i've read quite a bit of fantasy books and some sci-fi (only sci-fi ish books by Madeleine L'Engle whose work has a sci fi ish feel but also fantasy ish) i've never really taken interest in historical fiction. history yes ... because it is fascinating. blah, too much rambling. i suppose so far that this is my favorite borderland shifting thus far... and brian gets to show some brains! =D i like him. he's cool. ^^ i especially like his fascination and knowledge of history n stuff. hope you update soon!
r.mai 2004-08-07 ch 3,	abusewell hey ... at least she didn't shoot them. ^^;
r.mai 2004-08-07 ch 2,	abusesnicker ha ha ha. amusing. tatyana is someone i'm not sure i want as a friend lol. cool and scary. why doesn't thomas take self defense classes? and yay! we get to see omen again... if only for a bit this chapter...
r.mai 2004-08-07 ch 1,	abuseinteresting! ^^ the borderlands kind of remind me of The Unicorn Sonata ... the border keeps moving. It also sort of reminds of the magician's nephew book in the chronicle of narnia series.(but not as much as tus) there's a like a wood and pools which connect to different worlds... not being able to read... i don't know how i managed. i read every single day for hours! i love stories! brian sounds intelligent ... more so than a lot of people i know who are older than him. very interesting so far. i like the feel of the story. i'm moving on to the next chapter now. ^^
xenocaster 2004-07-14 ch 4,	abusei want to read more! you wouldnt happen to be writting another chapter would you? puppydog eyes

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