Excellent :D

I like it so far, and I'd like to see where you are going with it. Just one note: Please don't make Alyxandrina an over-powerful and over-perfect heroine, because that's how she seemed to me in this chapter.

Whoa...I WISH I could write anything as good as this. Anyway, I'm a little confused about what happened to Earth and Water and Wind and Fire.
But otherwise, the story's really good so far, and you HAVE to continue!