Awesome! Wow...you're a good author _and_ a poet? No fair. [pout] I like the lines:

To lose water, love
To gain fire, hate

Very well written! ^^ Keep up the great work.

spiffy! angst is our friend. really neat! you're good at poetry! i suck! go me! ciao!

yep, it is kind of dark.. i like it! keep writing ^^

Oh dear. . . that was a bit depressing indeed. And shame on you to do this instead of doing your homework! ^_^ Ah well. I'm glad you did this any ways or else I wouldn't be able to read this. I thought it was a perfectly splendid piece of work.

Thanks for the read,

Ciao.