(googly eyes) Must...have more! Yes!

This is awesome, simply awesome! You have to continue this; the story has so much potential! *looks at you with puppy dog eyes*

Great... love it!

the plot was too obvious

great job keep writing

You have brillant ideas for stories, this one was great. Just like the other ones! I can't wait until you update!

I like this story; it's very interesting and original. I actually only have a couple of problems, and they have to do with grammer. Every now and then, you seem to jump between tenses, and in a couple of spots where you were describing things, your speech was a little redundant--try using pronouns like 'it', such as in the spot where she's digging through the pots for her daughter. Another thing that might make it better would be if you connected more of the sentences, with commas or 'and.' These are just some things to look out for, other than that your story was great. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter.

Cool...