Good imagery and word choice, but they made me want to fall to the floor along with the diamonds in your poem. It's so sad! Especially since I know who this poem is referring to. :(

Very pretty and doll-like.

I love it. Simple but still powerful, especially that last line. I love the imagery you created. Great poem.

What were you doing in Utah, and where in Utah were you?

Lovely poem. I like the imagery.

Hey, that was really good!
It was short, but sweet... i like the images it creates. Nice job!

That is so great! Keep on writing! :D

aww, it's so short but yet so good ^-^ it can be taken so many different ways, i love it -lol- keep writing
~misfit