Ahaha, Zac's awesome. Quin still confuses me, though. I mean, it took until, maybe, the chapter before the last for me to finally think, "Oh, he *likes* Zac!" I thought it was all onesided and lusty, rather than anything serious. Glad it's not. XDD The penny-sock thing made me laugh so hard. I didn't expect it. XD

Oh, so much snark. I lol'ed as I have never lol'ed before. Friggen wonderful. Zac is a fantastic character and you're quite possibly brilliant. Cheers for the great read.

::squeal:: Very cute. Spaztic, but not so much that you lost me. A nice balance all around of silly and serious. A nice fun read, thanks! ^.^

WAHH!! THAT WAS SO GOOD!
Brilliant, crazy first person (and wonderful use of it on the possessing bit), great characters, wonderful lines -and you did it all in 10 chapters!!

Oh so good. :)

hi,
the beginning was really confusing, but i loved zac. his random way was really funny. and quinn´s good too.
cheers

After all that...I really didn't get it.

There was a lot of confusion in this chapter, but by the end I think I've got it down. -FG

This is one of the few stories on fiction press that I have read more than once that isn't a one-shot. Its good. I love the characters, the plot, but most of all the world you created. I have never read any other story with quite the same take on how 'magic' exists so that already gives you a high grade in my books. Good work.

Gosh, I love Zac. He is so funny! He when he's angry he's hilarious. That line about droping the pocket, i seriously laughed out loud. I love the whole concept of this stroy, especialy the 'hook' part. I can't help but wonder what it would be like to date a psychic though. I mean, you would never be able to plane a suprise party for them...by the way, I love the length of your chapters. Seeing so many words on the page is exciting because it's like the stroy will never end. I love it when sometimes I can't even finish a chapter in one siting. Of course, knowing me I would put everything else aside in order to finish said extra-long chapter because I can get obsessed like that. Great work. You are amazing.

Another great story with a stuning and original plot idea! it looks wonderful so far and i can't wait to keep reading more. ha, and i know excatly what Zac means by having writing instruments at hand; i have notebooks laying around everyweher i go! in my car, under my pillow, in my back pack...ive even been known to write down ideas and lrics on recipts! lol aw, 'tis the life of a writer. Anyway, like I said, great story, as always. Everything you write rocks!

i love you.

it turned out perfectly :) i do wonder what happens are people are dephysified, and so if nate could ever come back as a normal but still damn dangerous guy. but im pretty sure quin thought of that though.

(i love it)

WHAT? THE END? IM SO CONFUSED. I THINK I NEED TO REREAD THE ENTIRE STORY. but omg. i love nate. so. much. and i feel depressed for zac. because he likes quin. and quin is hung up over nate. and nate is all bitter towards quin. but hes so HOT. and yummy. and omg its so confusing. but i still love it. a lot. very original. yeah.

omg. this is very creepily awesome.

gahh the end erked me! is there more??!? pwease be more