It's a good poem. By the way, I'm Aileah's friend. You told us to check out your works some time.

Wow...this is really good! (I have a tendency of stating the obvious) It made ME feel depressed...but then I guess everyone feels that way once in a while anyway.
You captured the, uh...feeling or whatever you call it of depression very well.
You really should submit this somewhere, you know, besides fictionpress.net.

Cool! I love how you used the woods as a way to explain the darkness of depression. That is so great! And I loved your summary... That made me laugh.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams