Wow! These are great! Perhaps not so much if you look only in terms of artistry and poetic devices, but they're sincere, and that makes them beautiful. Good job!

i read your reviews so i diecided to read your poem. i love the way you used font styles to express the thoughts of different people. i'm asian, too, and ive never heard asians called stupid...most of my experience has been with people calling me "teachers pet" or "suck up" becuz i do well in school. i totally get what you're saying here, although i wonder that you didn't go more--whats the word...personal. when i lived in georgia black people were stereotyped as poor, illiterate, and the girls were thought to have...not-so-modest activities, if you will. in arizona the mexicans are thought of as gangsters and trouble-makers. and i've heard white people made fun of becuz they're "mixed," of all different backgrounds mingled, and "innocent little white girl," "sheltered"...

i think many people have a lot to learn, and this poem is a very good way of expressing some of the anger that some people of non-caucasian and caucasian races may feel. i'm also glad that you put that disclaimer, i wouldve been offended too :) and i suppose i should say that i don't believe any of these things either. keep writing about what you think, people will listen--or read :)

I love how you display how jealousy and other kinds of strife really get to people. It's horrible, terrible, disgusting... Good job nonetheless. You're a great poet.

very fast paced, well written. I like the paragraph about pitying the world. I also like how in the end you write about needing to open your eyes. I'm glad u put a disclaimer in the beginning...I probably would have taken offense. Some people don't put disclaimer's and just write...it's quite disturbing. I don't think there's any improvement that needs to be done to your work. Good job. Going to move on.

i like this because i feel the same, i don't understand why people feel others have to look a certain way, and I don't understand why we have to dress alike- i think we should all choose to wear/talk/act how we want to. ^_^

I absolutely love this. I don't see any improvements that can be made. I totally understand...it's really a parody of what ppl are like...sorta satric maybe. You did a really great job with this... some ppl should read this and recognize themselves. Then maybe they'll realize how stupid they are...we are even. I try not to but some of those stereotypes sneak in and I have to stop myself...alas I am but human...altho I try not to be...

Hm, I agree to this poem. As Iam asian. Many people think we're stupid people, but we're really not. I understand this poem and I intend to not critisize it. It was a very intresting poem to read and I must say, it was very good. I really liked the rythming features.

spoken by true trailer trash!
with no less than waving a confederate flag.