Aw... please update!

Wow, what a great story. I haven't been so drawn in since Harry Potter V.

Blumming 'eck lass! You've got your work cut out for yer! Hey, i have been following your fic in the background (I don't think i've reviewed...) I'm really enjoying it, it was a nice surprise to see you had a new chapter up, thought i'd introduce myself. It's getting right complicated for the poor girl now isn't it? How's she going to deal...is she going to get romantic with a certain Mr Anderson...? Only time will tell, there's chemistry it seems, can't wait for more! I'll still be reading even if i don't review! You're a bloody brilliant writer, keep going

Forget being a double agent, Angel's going to be a *triple* agent! Woo-hoo! I must admit, it's definitely a nice twist in the plot. But it's still too early to determine where her loyalties lie. Well, other than with herself, that is. Will she help out the police, or will she unwittingly fall in love with Peter Anderson and wind up taking his side? ::hint hint, wink wink::

Anyway...I can't wait to see where you take this. =D

Your writing skills continue to amaze me. The juxtaposition of the lord's prayer and Angel's work is a nice touch, it adds a feeling of a search for redemption or something similiar. One sentence in this chapter bothered me: "Being a killer had fine-tuned her sixth sense of being in touch with her surroundings, sometimes it was almost like she had eyes in the back of her head." I'm not sure exactly why, it might have been the repetition of being, or that the sentence souned more like a reference book than those surrounding it, but it seemed out of place. I'm really havin to search for nitpicky problems with your fiction though--you're an absolutely amazing writer.

Awsome, story. Really good, I love the way it's written, and the characters and, just, everything. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hmm... quite a lot happened in this chapter. Ice is still a creep... Lynch is starting to go crazy, too. I didn't realise he would be such an antagonist.

However, I do like Mrs. McNeil. She seems to be the only character that's completely out of it.

Well, try to update soon, anyway!

Now I really hate her brother. What an **. He's just peeved 'cause she's been given a top-secret assignment he doesn't know about. Ugh, I can't stand him. And I definitely can't stand Ice. Cowboy was all right before, but now he's grating on my nerves, too. Poor Angel, having to be surrounded by such jerks.

You said you like constructive criticism, but I've found in the past that I'm not really good at giving any. The only things I always pick up are grammatical errors (and that's just because I'm one of those grammar freaks), but there were only a few in this chapter and I'm too lazy to go back and pick them all out. I've got a question, though. Is Mrs. McNeill Robert Harvey's wife? And if she is, how come they've got different last names?

Aha!

So I see I'm not the only author who disappears for gaps of time :)

Oh, well, it was worth the wait... the twists, the twists! The one in the last chapter took me off guard; you completely built up the "old man" image in my head, when it came to Peter Anderson.

I like how the plot keeps thickening. I hope you're able to update soon.

Took me awhile to read, but I'm really enjoying where you're taking this. Just wanted to compliment you on how well you describe the scene, from the setting where it takes place to the actions and the vibes the characters give off. Makes for very active reading.

Keep up the great work!

Continue continue! Great beginning.

omg...i love this fic! unlike so many fics posted at fictionpress.com, this one has a honest to god plot! a good one at that... there's so many questions burning in my head now...like is the guy really peter anderson. what's angel's next step? will she fall in love with him (hehe ^_~) or vice versa? or both? (double hehe). yeah so...anyway. i really do hope u get ur life in order. i mean that in that with upmost sincerity. i read ur other fic on eating disorders and as a person who went through the very ordeal a few years ago, i geniuinely sympathize with your situation. anyway. good luck with everything and i eagerly away ur update.

Yeah, Angel is definitely way in over her head. But it makes for a good plot. And she's smart so hopefully everything will work out. Peter and Harvey don't know who they're dealing with. Hehe. Suckers.

another great chap! i know u busy and all and after writing another chap i really admire the fact that u didnt wetie this in a rush like most authors do...it usually ruins the whole plot when they do that! but what an interesting twist!

ive been waiting for this chap for a while...if u can, can u update a little faster?
by the way i like bady boys! lol