Just lovely Melody. The words soothe through and are of those that describe a mood of lonliness. I believe that it is a touching and upsetting poem, in which I do enjoy.

wow, i really love this piece- I feel like I can relate to it because I feel like i was placed on the wrong world by myself.

I live in "the land of lose life"...Also I really like the way in the 5th stanza you wrote "A lost soul with sorrowful hope" very bitter sweet. I think you did a great job with this piece. Good descriptions too. Great job. ^_^

*shiver* I can relate... Um good poem... and friends are good? *looks confuzed* (don't ask) So ya, that's all... Good poem :) *Thumbs up*

*vanishes into billowing smoke* *cough cough*

Very cool. I love this poem! All lonely...The language you choose is beautiful.

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I like it.. I guess it kinda reaches out to me every time I read it. *shrugs* Still, you did a great job with this one. Wish I could write like that. -_-;

You did an incredible job with this! I like how you said "it is the land of lost life". The title totally fits this. Keep writing!

Oddly enough I think I know this feeling...a need to return to something wonderful that has now been lost.

Beautiful, and poignant.